Fiery Bird
Fiery bird spread proud to fly
frolic in playful dance
peak and dive lyrically high!.
Treetop towers lye restful young
Early bird flutter the morn
In tangerine skies it sung!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Fiery bird spread proud to fly frolic in playful dance peak and dive lyrically high!. Treetop towers lye restful young Early bird flutter the morn In tangerine skies it sung!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I love the feel and sensations of colors and buoyancy in the poem! It's wonderful!. It gave me a gorgeous picture, tou descri be things so vividly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The poem was very short and sweet, very nice!. It was very deep and uplifting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Great , it has a rhythm to it and a smooth flow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com SMALL BUT GOODWww@QuestionHome@Com OH it's so pretty! It is almost like a classic verse, I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com wow sounds awesomeWww@QuestionHome@Com Very Good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com this is a really good poem :)Www@QuestionHome@Com short and sweet poem!.!.!.!. gud!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com very nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com |