Please criticize the heck out of my music ?

Question: Please criticize the heck out of my music !?

So lately I've been making a couple of multitrack recordings with guitar, bass, glockenspiel and melodica!. Constructive criticism will only make me better so please fire away!.

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"The Slightest Disturbance" - It's a neat little piece, but I kept waiting for it to go somewhere!. It doesn't really sound like a complete song!. also, there's a nasty hiss in your recording that you should try and get rid of using a parametric EQ!.

"About Time" - I was pleasantly surprised by this track!. My only real criticism is that it seems really heavy on the mid-range frequencies!. The only thing that really pops out on the high end is when the glockenspiel kicks in!. Might want to spend some time with the regular (not the parametric) EQ to try and get some separation, especially with between the bass and guitar tracks!.

Not really my style, but interesting stuff!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

very nice!. honest, clean, effortless!. i really like your stuff!.

you sound great on your second song; i also like the first!. you don't need much criticism!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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