I wrote a introduction for a pageant, tell me what you think!?
I am the girl who is in the Honeybee pageant in Louisiana and i was asking help to write an introduction before and i came up with something and I just wanted to know what you all thought!. The pageant is for 18-23 year old women, in my division so i was wondering if it was age appropriate!. It is all true i do love children and am in a service fraternity so i am doing community service almost every weekend so when i say it it won't sound fake!.
"As a junior at LSU majoring in elementary education I love to help young children and my community!. But when I’m not out tutoring or at service projects I’m as busy as a bee having fun with friends and family!. And here I’ve found a great way to do both, having fun while celebrating Louisiana’s honeybees and helping children by donating to St!. Jude!. Coming to you from the Capital City, Baton Rouge, I am ___ year old ________ ________, and I would love to represent this festival as your ‘queen bee’!"
let me know what you think!.
there ya go i was told it would be smart to erase my real name and age so just imagine it there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com