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Question: So!.!.!.would this monologue (sounds boring,right!?) hold your attention!?
It was a revelation of Evil!.
"A parting gift," it's maker wrote "to a world long berethed of honor!." Conceived in thoughts of hated and spite, it's sole purpose was terror!. An evil so great, that the pages from whence it came could not contain it!. Throughout the ages it preyed on those whom sought the answers to it origins!.

But they sought in vain, for no one has ever reached the last page!.

"Revenge, revenge!.!.!.!.!.!.sweet revenge!."

Emo-ish!? Yes!. Over-the-top Dramatic!? Heck yeah!. *smile* But does it have any promise!? Would you be interested to see things "cleared up"!? Thanks for any comments or imput!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Okay, you can write!. But before (in my opinion) you go into showing off your 'wares' try writing something less syrupy to grab the reader!.!.!.you don't go on a first date and put a lip-lock on her/him when they come to the door, be more subtle in your intro!.

You have skills, just don't use the big guns up front!.
One Star!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

With some context it would be much clearer how effective it really is!. BOKO!.Www@QuestionHome@Com