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Question: What do you think of this monologue I wrote!?
? It goes with a play I just wrote!. I want to use the monologue for an audition but no one will tell me if they like the monologue or not!. (Just ignore the grammar/spelling errors) :-)

? Izzy:
*I'm going to go crazy! I mean, literally! I don't know what's going to kill me first: the bills, this play, Angelina, or (frustrated)!.!.!.HIM!(Points to where Harvey just exited)!. Especially him!. I have never met anyone who makes me feel so frustrated!. Every time I see him I just want to ring his neck!. He has always done that to me, he always has to be so perfect, that's why I left New York!. I mean yeah we were best friends through most of high school, but that was thirteen years ago!. We grew apart, we grew up!. He lived out his dream and I lived out mine, in a way!. What matters is right now!.!.!. he is rich, successful, and yeah while I'm just!.!.!. uh, I'm exactly where I was when I moved here! Gosh, he just makes me feel so different, so happy, he actually makes me feel like I might be beautiful!. (Pause) You know if it wasn't for him I probably would have lost my marbles back in high school!. He was always there for me and me for him!. I still remember the first time we met!. It was sophomore year, I was coming out of the drama classroom and there he was, standing there in the hall talking with his friends!. I was mesmerized, I just kept on walking thinking Wow who's that!?, Where did he come from!?!. I was so mesmerized that I walked right into a girls locker door as she swung it open!. I went flying to the ground and my books went everywhere!. He ran over to help me pick up my books and as he helped me up I said thanks and then he smiled at me and we both laughed!. He then insisted on letting me let him help me to the nurses office!. But of course he didn't really have to insist it at all because hey you say what he looks like now, imagine that!.!.!. but 15 years ago!. But back to the story, I ended up finding out that I had broke my nose all because of Harvey stinkin' MacKenzie!. My best friend, we had our moments and all but!.!. I think!.!.!. I love him!.!.!. again!. Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow! it's beautiful! i really like it!. all i would change would be!.!.!.

"He then insisted on helping me to the nurses office" instead of "He then insisted on letting me let him help me to the nurses office"

good luck with your audition and let me know how it goes!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com