what do you think!?
http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=27v5LbgyY!.!.!.i'm just testing this out!. i wrote it, and i'm not sure how well it's gonna go over, so i'm hoping to get some feedback on here!. here's the lyrics:
Take it up
Show me up
Throw my hands up
Stares you use
Words we abuse
All the love we misuse
Come down, turn around, and face it,
Shake it off, run it down, and make it…happen
You wanna lift me up, and drag me back down,
Fill my heart, break it, and I can’t take it…anymore
You laugh at me
Just to anger me
If you want to leave, then leave me
Cuz I don’t need this in my life
Don’t need the pain, the strife
Relieve my back of this knife
Come down, turn around, and face it,
Shake it off, run it down, and make it…happen
You wanna lift me up, and drag me back down,
Fill my heart, break it, and I can’t take it…anymore
You lie to me,
You lie to me!.
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omg! this is really good! ur voice sounds amazing and the song rocks and has a realistic message!. this is awesome keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great guitar playing and singing of a talented, budding song writer!.
If you intend to write a sad, hear wrenching song of hurt and victimhood, I'd advise you to end it with a note of hope otherwise it tends to bring the listeners down enotionally and not really want to listen to the song again unless they don't mind wallowing in the victimized self pitty of the character in the lyrics!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
great guitar parts, great voice!.!.!. what's with the lryrics!? i'm getting sick of everybody right bout there sorrows and be really sad!. Well guess what, we don't have much time to live, why be sad!? might as well make the best of it!.
point is, make a happier songWww@QuestionHome@Com
it is harribal to borying spice it up have a couris that repeats change the words to they make you seem angryWww@QuestionHome@Com