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Please be honest do u like my poem??

you know ho you are,
you are the one who stripped my whole life from me,
the one who hurt me, and said that you loved me at the same time.
the one who controlled me and everything i did.
yet i still loved you back
you know who you are
the one who had my family between your fingers,
you were the one who had them turn their backs on me when i needed them most, it was you who they believed, not me.
i dont understand how you did it,but you did,and you did it well
i would ask why you would hurt me so badly
you said becaus you liked to see me bleed and beg you for my life
it was you that made that i couldnt even leave my own home with out fear, it was you who put these scares on me,i have always
prayed that happiness would come again. but i know it wont.
i know who you are and you know who you are.

this was inspirred by an abusive situaion with my parents

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6 months ago
i wrote this 3 years ago when i was 11, and i hid it so nobody could see it except me.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 6 months ago
i wrote this 3 years ago when i was 11, and i hid it so nobody could see it except me.