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Position:Home>Arts & Humanities> Can you please tell me how I can improve this poem??Question: Can you please tell me how I can improve this poem??Please, No kiss *** answers. I want your true opinion and input . I have already posted it and fixed it once, but tell me if its better or how I can improve it. Thanks! (I'm also looking for a title.) Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I don't know how you can improve it,but I like it as it is ,I don't kiss ***. |